10:41 PM: the worst free voice poem ever.

don't ever try to write a freeverse poem. you can't do it without looking goth/emo/retarded.
an example by me *note to everyone who's asked: i set out to make this poem bad...on purpose* :(

here.

now.

be.

I.

cry.

in.

vain.

as.


the

tears

fall

down


my

crestfallen


face


i

hate

why does it hurt so much
feels
like a black hole..
falling, falling
you said you wouldn't hurt me,
so why
did you hurt me
i fall asleep
to the sound
of
my
own
screams

myself

what

is

life?


just some







game???

-Snow falling on photographs....


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